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    dots Submission Name: Neighbourhood Bully dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Neighbourhood Bully
    ( title from Bob Dylan’s album “ Infidels ” )

    Always the gentle and the meek
    The target
    For beating and brow beat
    Back

    Some with fists
    And some with guns
    Others with words
    Blackmailing emotion

    And others come with religion

    Always the gentle and the meek
    The kind souls
    They seek
    Their targets

    Disguised in humility

    “ What ? Who ? Me ? ”

    Bigger
    Stronger
    More astute
    Bullies ply abuse
    In tyrannical tirades

    Weaker
    Weakness
    They cover
    In their faceless violence
    Of younger
    More tender
    Hearts

    And screaming vendetta
    They will scorn
    Whip lash from afar
    Any who stand firm

    Turn and pray
    They never return
    To point the finger
    Back at the accuser
    Bully



    Always prey on the gentler and meek
    The soft and kind
    They seek
    Their targets

    Never caring for the damage
    Or hurt they cause
    Self serving
    Sentiments
    Their only goal

    Neighbourhood
    Playground
    Bullies
    Never grow up

    They are a singular circle of fear
    Reaching out to capture freedom
    Curtail the burgeoning light
    Which is not their own
    While hiding behind the mask of love
    Or behind a fist
    Or behind a gun
    Bully
    Personality
    Weapon















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