Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Neighbourhood Bully dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 370
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1735



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsNeighbourhood Bully dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Neighbourhood Bully
    ( title from Bob Dylan’s album “ Infidels ” )

    Always the gentle and the meek
    The target
    For beating and brow beat
    Back

    Some with fists
    And some with guns
    Others with words
    Blackmailing emotion

    And others come with religion

    Always the gentle and the meek
    The kind souls
    They seek
    Their targets

    Disguised in humility

    “ What ? Who ? Me ? ”

    Bigger
    Stronger
    More astute
    Bullies ply abuse
    In tyrannical tirades

    Weaker
    Weakness
    They cover
    In their faceless violence
    Of younger
    More tender
    Hearts

    And screaming vendetta
    They will scorn
    Whip lash from afar
    Any who stand firm

    Turn and pray
    They never return
    To point the finger
    Back at the accuser
    Bully



    Always prey on the gentler and meek
    The soft and kind
    They seek
    Their targets

    Never caring for the damage
    Or hurt they cause
    Self serving
    Sentiments
    Their only goal

    Neighbourhood
    Playground
    Bullies
    Never grow up

    They are a singular circle of fear
    Reaching out to capture freedom
    Curtail the burgeoning light
    Which is not their own
    While hiding behind the mask of love
    Or behind a fist
    Or behind a gun
    Bully
    Personality
    Weapon















    Submitted on 2009-01-29 21:59:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    170620

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Wavelength written by saartha
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Incubus written by monad
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Linger written by saartha
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Bond written by saartha
    Break Up written by WriteSomething
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    To Glow written by krs3332003
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Song written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry