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    dots Submission Name: Acciaccaturadots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 370
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    And filled with stars and the land
    A pale gentle hand turned the hourglass
    Of my soul

    Stalking the alabaster moon
    I rejoined once more
    Those who follow the dream

    Cutting through crests
    Time the scythe of a barque
    Treads a song of brothers to sisters of paradise

    The prow our ship a searching
    Arch-ed carrying the whispered will
    Of wishings an ambition to our hearts

    Pursuing the alchemy of the moon
    Leaping from the shoals
    A single white rose this beacon to follow

    The mariners we of her phantasmal
    Blown by the hunger in blood and breath
    Drifting in the calm thunder tethered to a single kiss

    Full of stars and the land
    A pale gentle hand turns the hourglass
    Of my soul

    The ghost in our throats calling
    Seducing answers to the lamplet
    Painted faces of splendour in her horizons distant

    She softly sings us closer
    Passage through the veils
    Drawing on this our meandering ark

    An endless ribbon of red flows behind
    The vein of each passing quest
    As this ship awash the glinting semblance of her face

    I have chosen like my brothers, my sisters; to be the seafarer
    To search her shadow
    Pursue the alabaster moon

    Her pale gentle hand
    Filled with stars and the land
    Turns the hourglass of my soul

    Isis the light and by Dianna named
    Magdalena’s rose of mystery proclaimed
    The witchcraft of the feminine

    Thus the sail-ed cutter of waves and dreams
    Billowed on clouds

    The diamond sea we gather
    Compass point to reflection
    The full moon risen alabaster

    Her pale gentle hand
    Filled with stars and the land
    Turned the hourglass of my soul

    (Acciaccatura; An ornament note that is one half step or one whole step below a principal note and is sounded at the same time as the principal note, adding dissonance to a harmony. a note in a music deliberately played out of key )

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