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    dots Submission Name: Time Barriersdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 300
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsTime Barriersdots

    Time Barriers

    How can this be
    Where did we begin
    Not in any kiss
    Has passed this secret
    Onto the present

    Did we miss
    Separated in timelessness
    Undefined memories
    Shimmer in fields
    Where your bare feet
    Pressed to yellow flowers

    I heard you laughing
    Dancing will-o-the wisp
    Leaned in a doorway
    Between worlds
    And windows
    Of promises

    The edge of salvation
    Once rested in our arms
    We had broken
    A thousand nightmares
    Hand in hand
    Still we walked into
    The vanquished dark

    Silken threads of another life
    Slumbering their stitches
    Inside my soul
    And life has drawn upon
    Its golden needle
    To draw me ever closer
    To you

    Some purpose to purpose
    Meant to be
    How did we agree
    In the great divide
    To continue in these separate

    Did I know you would haunt
    The remembrance of my blood
    Did you know that your pulse
    Would someday race
    Behind the recognition
    Of a strangers face

    And love once known
    Sings such a peculiar song
    Of unknown echoes
    Their familiarity
    Bringing tears to my eyes
    And pierces my heart
    With such eternal longings

    Far distant your day
    Sips on the hours of my night
    Alone in our rooms
    Behind ocean deep windows
    So insubstantial
    To reaching thoughts
    And the yearnings of love
    As to break the walls
    Time barriers
    All the space between
    Our separate lives

    And my voice calls to you
    Wind from these shores
    My eyes will search for you
    For ever more
    And I will swear
    To death and beyond
    To find you
    One day
    Some day
    Past time barriers
    Never again to leave you


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