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    dots Submission Name: We Knewdots
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    Author: SDodson
    ASL Info:    18/f/fl
    Elite Ratio:    4.65 - 35/22/21
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Love
    Total Views: 681
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1080



    Description:
       It was going to be a journal, but I don't want to ever replace the way I am feeling right now. Knowing that she has forgiven me for all the hateful things. I don't ever want to forget the love I have at this very moment in time. So I submit. There is nothing anyone could suggest to make this any better than it is. A piece of my soul. The piece that belonged to her. My Becky.


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    It's like some things never end. I think we knew even then that someday it would be "put on hold", I think is the right phrase. Like we knew that we better make those plans now before it's too late. Yeah, we knew, we knew that out of everything there was the good times to hold on to. After the hatred left and the tears were dried, after the sadness ebbed; we knew it would be time to be together again. I'm not sure if 10 years is too long, or too short. I have no idea if it will continue or stop in it's tracks. But that night when we sat in my room, and looked at the beach pictures and saw the woman holding her child walking with the woman with short hair we knew that we would always need to be together. Time hasn't changed my love I knew I had for her. Time hasn't changed holding her while she cried and PROMISING I would take her away, no matter the cost, I would set her free. I know she's free I'm sorry I wasn't there to see her spread her wings, she's free. We knew that I loved her the way she loved me.




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