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    dots Submission Name: The pain of hurtingdots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    15/Female/tmon
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 92/158/234
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 165
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 293



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       Again, some more randomm stuff? I dont know what this is coming to, but thats all it is lately.


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    dotsThe pain of hurtingdots
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    Lost in the pain of hurting you
    I cannot be alive
    After breaking your heart
    I cannot feel my own
    I am so damn tired of hurting you
    And hurting myself
    Forget the pain
    Forget the love
    Nothing I do for you
    Will ever be enough




    Submitted on 2009-02-02 15:11:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very honest and straight to the point. Though this makes it seems that you're in so much pain. Let that pain turn into a way of reaching out to relate to someone who is going thru something similar
    | Posted on 2009-02-05 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]


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