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    Author: EEKS
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    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I watched the waves hit and devastation
    was her nature, her intentions


    From space I can see a corpse a minute
    A mile for every breath
    And where do you fit in?
    I never know where you fit in.

    This is our forever, concrete foresight
    But for a minute there, I forgot myself


    The world was never born
    If it was, it died the day I woke up




    Submitted on 2009-02-02 16:54:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey hi long time no yak

    i like this because it makes me think about what you are saying and also what your not

    it keeps me thinking about the unknown

    sandman
    | Posted on 2009-02-04 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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