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    dots Submission Name: Hanky Pankydots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 383
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsHanky Pankydots
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    Hanky Panky

    Honey
    My foot is taping
    Itís been a while
    I figure itís gotta be almost
    An hour

    Baby
    You know you
    Drive me crazy
    How you do it
    Constantly
    You tease my eyes
    Itís no surprise
    Your naughty smiles
    Make me so ravenously hungry

    Aw come on baby
    My heart is jitterbugging
    Itís been a while
    At least an hour
    Iíve been waiting
    Since I had my
    Honey fix

    Letís fool around a bit
    And play at hanky panky

    You make me crazy
    Turn me into 140 pounds
    Of Olympian athlete
    I need you now sweetie
    Just gotta have your kiss
    My drug
    Is on your lips

    Letís fool around a bit
    And play with hanky panky

    Baby
    I just canít help it
    Youíre just so god damn sexy
    Even in your rollers
    A radiant beauty
    Even in your bath robe
    A bewitchery
    Everything about you
    Drives me crazy

    Itís only been half an hour
    You tell me
    Feels like longer
    You gotta help me
    My blood is all polka dot and jiving
    Come on honey
    I think I might be dieing
    Itís been a while
    Must be more than an hour

    Letís fool around
    Play together at hank panky

    Honey
    You know I love you
    And how you love me
    Itís not my fault
    Your wicked eyes are saying
    Irresistibly
    Maybe
    You make my pulse pound
    Because I can see
    That little wiggle
    When you look at me
    And that little giggle
    Is already playing
    With the hanky panky

    AW come on Baby
    Glide on over
    And end my misery
    Together weíre just so good
    At hanky panky
    Exploding sugars
    How you make me
    Walk the tight rope
    Of a single hour
    Itís been awhile
    Since we got together
    And did the hanky panky

    Flash those honey eyes
    And bat those eyelids
    Walk on over
    And be my Goddess
    Itís been so long since I had your kiss
    My drug is on your lips
    I canít resist
    Everything about you
    Answers my every wish

    Everything about me
    Is your hanky panky





















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