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Author: muhammed
ASL Info:    23/male/Egypt
Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 89 /129 /124
Words: 107
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Beautiful faces beautiful lies,
Beautiful smiles beautiful eyes,
Beautiful sins in disguise,
A beauty you and I cannot exercise,

All we have is the beauty we gain,
The beauty of emotions, the beauty of the spirit,
Not the beauty that we inherit.
The beauty who leaves in fain,
on what we touch a stain.
the beauty we gain by pain ...
The beauty; that everyone can attain,

The beauty that make the brunet alight,
You are not snow-white
And I'm not the Hunchback of Notre Dame
You are beautiful like the pride in poor man,
and I don't think I'm beautiful …
...I know I'm.

Submitted on 2009-02-02 20:51:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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