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    dots Submission Name: Another Vein - - Another Valentinedots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsAnother Vein - - Another Valentinedots
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    Another Vein - - Another Valentine

    Earth shattering silence you bring
    The enveloped wing of your being fills me
    Confessions of love are never enough

    The more of me to you
    Is another vein in my sleepless words
    Written restless on hot sheets

    How the taste of you
    Lingers a sorcery of enchanted language speaks
    Soft aphrodisia of my imaginings

    Angel of passion in connotation
    Your beauty pussy cats this hearts symmetry
    Felled I fall so willingly

    Lost in your captured palms
    The cage of my ever dreaming love
    Holding you would be enough

    With the magnitude of the space in my heart
    I will give you more
    Than love can command




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