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    dots Submission Name: Why?dots

    Author: extrEMO
    ASL Info:    18. Ima guy. NC
    Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 77/57/29
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 681
    Average Vote:    2.0000
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    Why does everyone hate me?
    What have I done to them?
    All the cruel jokes
    All the names
    Why is everyone so cruel
    Is it the clothes I wear?
    Is it the Black?
    Is it the scars?
    Is it the looks?
    Why do they do this? Give me a reason!
    They can't!
    How about this?
    Give me a reason not to jump
    Not to take the pills
    Not to make the cut
    Not to pull the trigger
    ... They can't.

    Submitted on 2009-02-06 01:55:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      LOVE IT><. I hope you don't pull the trigger cuz your poems are by far some of the damn best I've read on here. What would I read then?
    | Posted on 2011-02-12 00:00:00 | by Undead37 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow your poem was very strong. i hate when people say things to me and call me emo or razor blades. im not saying i know how you feel because no one realy knows how someone feel. but it is sad and kinda scarry. im hoping your not wanting to do that in real life i went through that, then i found someone to love and who loves me. so like wolfgurl830 said you just need someone. i send you love in here though. <3 hearts kisses huggs anything you need. XOXOX mwha
    | Posted on 2009-10-08 00:00:00 | by MiseryMarie | [ Reply to This ]
      Kewl.In a way it could be a poem. And its nothing thats wrong with you... you just need someone.
    | Posted on 2009-03-24 00:00:00 | by wolfgurl830 | [ Reply to This ]
      This writing was not a poem that I could relate to at all. Firstly, it was written with anger instead of the true emotion felt. Try to find the true emotion you are feeling and write about that, it will be more affective for your readers.
    | Posted on 2009-02-06 00:00:00 | by StephE | [ Reply to This ]

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