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    dots Submission Name: Unknown Cocoon of Ending 2dots

    Author: col13x
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    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsUnknown Cocoon of Ending 2dots

    Unknown Cocoon of Ending 2

    Sleeping obsidian
    In tiger eye veins
    Languish unknown cryptics of beginning
    Hidden form of inevitability
    Ending where the fatal knell
    Shall rest and tally the chronology


    Unknown cocoon of ending

    Must fall now persona non grata
    Inviolate, childlike perhaps
    The lucidity too quiet
    Too petulant for relief
    Still undisclosed the peripheral
    Breaths on release

    Populated by shadows

    The catcher of falling tears


    Unknown cocoon of ending

    Darkness sleeping
    To be known by the pit
    A sanctimonious belly of beguiled fools
    The fratricide of light
    And homicide of faith
    Shall rest and count the cost of stupidity


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