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    dots Submission Name: choosing sidesdots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
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    dotschoosing sidesdots
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    how you gonna act like you dont know me knowing damn well we grew up homies lately you been actin hella phoney thats how i know theres nothin new you could show me

    so im kinda confused but im gonna risk bein used cuz right now i know its the time to choose and not have to be abused i know someones gonna lose and im sorry if its you but i know you already knew

    im leaving you dont love and im contemplating life i wonder if youll need me but i know youll wonder twice and as im falling from this feeling it could all end here tonight and i know what im missing but i also know the light




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