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    dots Submission Name: You are the lancer (Praise)dots
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    Author: Duke Medhat
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    5.08 - 58/38/24
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 659
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    Bytes: 483



    Description:
       I wrote this praise poem as a thank you poem for our commercial law doctor Dr. Walaa Arkeeb for his exam which was very great; I got 2.25 out of 2.5


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    dotsYou are the lancer (Praise)dots
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    When the doctorate was created
    It was created for Walaa
    When the exams was created
    It was dull till, you, doctor Walaa

    Doctor Walaa, you are the lancer
    And there is no lancer but you
    Only your exams have an answer
    All of us done well, not just a few

    O lancer, tell me where will you ride
    And we all, shall ride with you
    To glory, with you, side by side
    Till the end, we will still with you




    Submitted on 2009-02-07 15:16:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Funny how we can forget the simple pleasure of... well.... simple. Not everything needs to be flowery and complacated
    | Posted on 2009-02-08 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]


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