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    dots Submission Name: never believed in spirit 'til nowdots
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    Author: weepingwillow
    ASL Info:    23/f/Brighton
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 38/75/35
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Misc/Sorry
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    dotsnever believed in spirit 'til nowdots
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    perfect,oval,your hands

    the hands that stroked a trillion strings
    filling your pelvis with all manner of hymns


    vast eyes, clear and jade-stone green
    laughter-dancing-inbetween
    a subtlety of the highest esteem
    the stuff that dreams are made with.

    your skin it housed
    the temperament of a brilliant sophisticat

    in eulogising,I am embittered,
    for you are a constant kaliedoscope for me

    I weep out oceans, though I sail gladly
    a stitch in your truth tapestry





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      An artist unrestrained, guitarist untamed
    the brand whose hands answer vacant space
    With intrinsic libation
    a sobering intoxication
    Being jadeds not always bad
    to recognize color or beauty amass
    in a moment
    each seprate component
    viewing rose withered prose unpossesed
    we are blessed
    | Posted on 2009-02-09 00:00:00 | by shaman | [ Reply to This ]


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