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    dots Submission Name: yearbookdots
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    Author: brokenmuse
    ASL Info:    22/F/AL
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 754/728/155
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 90
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    dotsyearbookdots
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    a black and white photo
    still-frame golden years
    and awkward first touches

    where do the years go
    when you find yourself
    so many years and miles
    from friends and smiles

    all the dreams you used to have
    the first kisses and budding hopes
    all that naivete come and gone

    like the miles along the road
    touches and whispers spent
    and not returned

    does it all really live on?
    or just become
    a bittersweet memory
    an origame moment
    and a quiet, pained laugh
    when you sit alone
    looking back at what might
    have been

    so many smiles
    so many miles
    and still you stay a friend.




    Submitted on 2009-02-09 06:07:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      sometimes smiles can be fake, too, and wouldn't you rather be far away from those?
    this poem was easy to relate to, which is why i liked it very much. Thank you for putting into words some of those things we always feel and never know how to express.
    | Posted on 2009-02-09 00:00:00 | by WeirdNormality | [ Reply to This ]



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