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    dots Submission Name: Solar Plexus ( Sun of The Soul )dots
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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsSolar Plexus ( Sun of The Soul )dots
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    Solar Plexus ( Sun of The Soul )

    Tiphereth

    Centre she holds the light
    Connection to description
    Concentration of all the names
    Of beauty
    Filtered from out pouring skies
    Entrusted to perception
    Before these provoking eyes

    Solar Plexus
    Third state consciousness
    Her Aeon vibration
    Calling
    Proposition to ignite
    The sleeping Chakra heart

    Sol sustaining
    The augury of hope
    She proliferates
    Never and forever
    Changing
    The coloured combinations
    Of living

    Goddess of all she is

    And without
    No acuity to perceive
    The idylls
    Of these convoluted explanations
    Of existence
    Of awareness

    Face of creation
    She is
    All life’s attractions
    To her radiance and adamantine warmth
    Exists
    Beacon she is
    Living cell of solar system
    Embodies Galactic entity

    And what unknown umbilical
    Resounds to this magnitude
    Of the ever eternal point
    Centred
    Touches this Galaxy of stars
    Space Universal
    Extends


    Extends a phantom finger
    Through the vast and the void veils
    Extends a phantom finger
    And somehow
    Writes
    And reads
    These
    Words
















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