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    dots Submission Name: Only Mad Dogs and English Mendots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsOnly Mad Dogs and English Mendots
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    Only Mad Dogs and English Men


    Even though dusty heat
    Settles on your shoulders
    The clear cut and stark
    Through polarized shades
    Crisps through blue
    The sky a blanket of sun
    As she treads on flip-flops
    Hums to the cicada rhythm
    Only mad dogs and English men
    Go out in

    Sea a glitter mid day zenith
    Of short shadows
    Welcomed cool places
    Where ice cold beer trickles
    Like you
    Perspiring the winter memories away

    Long, long days
    Summer stores for deep green leaves
    To make you so heady
    Drowsy washed up in tanning
    With bright flowers rainbow
    Gently nodding their fires

    So loose and scanty clothing it is
    To catch the breezes
    Skin is tingling warming
    The light freedom feeling
    Almost wearing nothing
    Basks in beaches of your eyes
    And puffs happy at the hot skies

    And at last the dusk draws long
    Burning red sets sheets
    With pink orange paints
    Carries you to a rocking chair of clouds
    Set ablaze the air
    While night crickets wake
    The cicada sleeps
    The last dipping shoulder slips beneath
    Radiates the promise
    To shine just it has
    Tomorrow

























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