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    dots Submission Name: Where We Stand.dots
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    Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
    ASL Info:    22/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46/119/104
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 785
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 288



    Description:
       Just a small poem I thought of in my head when thinking about my boyfriend. (: Might be tacky, but I think it's kind of cute.


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    dotsWhere We Stand.dots
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    Standing tall we are;
    Content, connected and loved.
    Let the weak talk;
    Allow the bold to criticize.
    For our bond will never break,
    No matter how great the force that tries may be—
    Our love is tender and strong—
    We were meant to be.




    Submitted on 2009-02-09 17:10:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Not my slice of cheese cake, I am not going to lie. However, I do think this is something that some people would love. I also think this belongs in a v-day card. Take from that what you will.
    | Posted on 2009-02-09 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]


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