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    dots Submission Name: Simulacrum Souldots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsSimulacrum Souldots
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    Simulacrum Soul



    Are you a dream

    Did I consider and formulate

    The prose images

    Which captivate my soul

    So completely

    And well up from me

    Such a missing

    As to leave me hanging

    Useless

    On tones of desire

    Are you a dream

    Romantic held

    And beauty seen

    Someone I may once have

    Known

    The touch of you

    Lingers

    My fingertips reminisce

    Somewhere in my soul

    Are you a dream

    A dream of waiting

    A dream of longing

    A pounding echo of

    Having

    Spoken so close

    I

    Your neck once felt

    The brush of my breath

    Fall soft tingled

    Turned your ear

    To my lips

    I

    Whispered then

    I love you

    While my arms in worship

    Wrapped about you

    Only to bring

    The depths of your eyes

    Closer

    So much closer

    To mine



    Are you a dream
    I think not












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