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"what if"


Author: save me
ASL Info:    19/F
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Class/Type: Rant /Venting
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"what if"



without a set of manual instructions to follow,
for everyday guidelines,
human beings panic.
we disperse like a flock of geese.

who am i to question human existence, let alone my own life?
i'm left empty handed each time.
in the air, nothing but unanswered questions
that linger for a lifetime.
all i want to know is why am i here, singular, as an individual.
what is my purpose?

have you ever had those 'what if' questions.
after everything you do, you question yourself.
every painful thing that happens in life,
you question it,
what would the world be like if that hadn't have happened?

what if you had known the truth?
what if you had known how i really felt?
what if i got up and screamed i love you?
what if you knew?
what if?

but we're not that lucky to have that chance. to start over, and find out what if. we are left unknowing and in the dark. for we are nothing,

merely human beings.




Submitted on 2009-02-09 22:27:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  You've expressed a feeling that many of us have felt and have put it to words very nicely. I truly enjoyed reading this piece and will look for more of your work in the future!
| Posted on 2009-02-11 00:00:00 | by JustAnotherMe | [ Reply to This ]
  i read it and i liked it, for me could of been longer but who knows, keep writting and ill keep reading, tyson
| Posted on 2009-02-10 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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