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    dots Submission Name: Just Strangedots
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    Author: KillSpoon
    ASL Info:    15/f/CAN
    Elite Ratio:    5.48 - 9/5/7
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 67
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    Bytes: 831



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    dotsJust Strangedots
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    Sore scars on my body ask
    If I can't kill people
    and if I can't save people
    than what use am I?
    Days will whither by
    and I can be amazed.
    I can be inspired
    and I can be delighted.
    I can jump in
    and not find anything,
    except for more words.
    If you read; you'll judge
    are the words
    printed across my face.
    Although I don't need
    to fake a smile.
    It's always just there waiting
    for a good or bad reason to appear.
    Train tracks call for endings
    and I call for reasonings.
    Either rarely get
    their wish fulfilled,
    thought death and truth
    are much more common than believed.
    Nothing has to be normal or expected.
    Just strange.




    Submitted on 2009-02-10 00:21:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      to read your work, I find it hard to beleive your age. I cannot particularly find anything to critisize, but then again im less familiar with your writing style
    | Posted on 2009-02-12 00:00:00 | by ThisIsReal | [ Reply to This ]



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