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    dots Submission Name: Barter Systemdots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    Barter System

    Iím fond of the flat
    Iconography of a steamrolled
    Smiley face. It reminds
    Me of the patterned
    Sweaters worn
    By indifferent
    Psychologists

    Like you -

    Can I have my meds, now?




    Submitted on 2009-02-10 04:45:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      :-) Love this. I love everything about it.

    And I prefer smiley faces to my own. Why give away what you live on.
    | Posted on 2009-09-15 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      lol, I thought it was actually really witty. No critisism, and it didn't bring me to a different plane, yadayadayada. But it made me laugh.


    Carrie
    | Posted on 2009-07-24 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      I see all around this one and it's about the complacency that we've come to enjoy by letting others mask our desires and ambition. And addiction, the addiction being toward a no stress life and the willingness to sign off and drool into our own shirts.

    OK, I'm sure i saw too much here, but you have a knack for adjusting the focus so we see something unusual..

    I love the touch on patterns of sweater and smileys, in fact that's what gave me the clue as to your meaning. Orderly. I think we're an extremely controlled society, or at least someone seems to believe they're in charge.

    Cool write, you're a maniac but in a very stylish way.

    Nan
    | Posted on 2009-02-25 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      Meds are not like the media feds
    full of hype and uncolored reds
    painting squashed faces with smiles
    assenting to media wiles
    like sages by a burning bush
    knowing not when to shut the tush
    as if the phyche warmed the soul
    on a coach hard and cold.
    | Posted on 2009-02-22 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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