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    dots Submission Name: Eczemadots
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    Author: freak_like_me
    ASL Info:    20/female/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    4.81 - 120/118/49
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 844
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 434



    Description:
       I was angry. I have eczema. You'll understand


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    dotsEczemadots
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    Its like telling somebody
    Who smokes 60 cigarettes a day

    To stop smoking

    Its like telling somebody
    Who drinks a bottle of whiskey a day

    To stop drinking

    And it's like telling somebody...
    Who eats 8000 calories a day

    To stop eating

    And these people have the cheek...
    To tell ME

    To stop scratching?




    Submitted on 2009-02-10 14:41:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I thoroughly enjoyed this.

    It shows just how hypocritical people can be, but, what I've notice recently, is that bad habits are always easier to spot from a 3rd person point of view. I feel if everyone could watch themselves on TV, going about their daily routines, we'd all make a lot of changes.

    Anyways, this was a very good rant, and I did actually "laugh out loud" not just three letters everyone seems to slap on after every other sentence.

    Thanks for the read.

    -Alex
    | Posted on 2009-02-10 00:00:00 | by screamALEX | [ Reply to This ]


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