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    dots Submission Name: Kitlerdots
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    Author: freak_like_me
    ASL Info:    20/female/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    4.81 - 120/118/49
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 744
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I got the name for the poem on www.catsthatlooklikehitler.com they call them kitlers! its amazing! lol


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    dotsKitlerdots
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    Kitler
    Only a cat that looks like hitler
    Our next door Neighbour
    Had one of these...Kitlers

    Oh it was a nasty piece of work
    Staring in through my living room window
    Watching me with its Hitler eyes
    Petting we with its Hitler smile

    It used its left leg
    To guard itself from me as I walked past the window
    It hissed at me
    I had no beef with the damn thing anyway

    Sometimes I felt sorry for Kitler
    As he seemed to be a very troublesome cat
    Also, slightly overweight
    At that
    He had a hitler smudge
    Just above his small mouth
    And above his pretty cat nose

    Poor Kitler
    Looks like Hitler
    ...Always fighting with his new Neighbour




    Submitted on 2009-02-10 15:02:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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