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    Author: col13x
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Big Foot



    Unconcerned giants
    Walk through
    The miniature landscapes
    Of ants




    Submitted on 2009-02-10 20:11:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ' blink in confusion ' so simple, so short, to the point right haha i like how that worked. your play on words and your manipulation of the title it's well it's good. hahahha no complaints today!
    | Posted on 2009-02-13 00:00:00 | by every48seconds | [ Reply to This ]


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