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    dots Submission Name: Crisisdots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsCrisisdots
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    Crisis



    Understand this
    Those who already
    Persist and exist
    Living on subsistence
    Will
    Survive












    Submitted on 2009-02-10 20:11:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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