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A little note.


Author: SamiScream
ASL Info:    16/F/SD
Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 17 /14 /11
Words: 160
Class/Type: Poetry /Venting
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A little note.



Dear Reader,
I am writing this because I need to vent.
I don’t know where my life spun out of control.
I don’t know why I let it.
Ever since last summer.
I’ve been living a lie.
My whole life’s a joke.

I kinda want to committ suicide.
I know I shouldn’t.
But it’s the only way to escape this mess.
My mom quit her job.
So we had to move.
I don’t fit in at my new school.
I don’t have any friends.

I met this guy at a concert.
I told him I like him.
He says he likes me too.
But when I asked him out.
He said he didn’t like me anymore.
It hurt.
It hurt so much.

I guess I’m not supposed to be loved.
But it’s so hard watching my old friends.
And everybody else fall in love.
And not me.
Life blows.
Good thing I won’t be living anymore.




Submitted on 2009-02-11 17:44:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wow, this was really deep and personal and it feels like Ive just seen all the worst parts about your life fly past me. But you've still got alot to live for, your young and there will be oportunities and chances, so don't give up so soon!
-Aang
| Posted on 2009-02-13 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]


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