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    dots Submission Name: Dodge This or Die Standing Heredots
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    Author: lovedeathsdeath
    ASL Info:    20/M/NCUSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.28 - 39/43/33
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsDodge This or Die Standing Heredots
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    Your gun to my head
    giving me a challenge.
    I feel you next to me-
    so close. Nothing's wrong.

    How do I
    respond to this?
    I don't. Passive
    resistance of fear.

    I should speak
    plainly, but
    clearly words escape.
    Orion speaks as much.

    This was not here
    for so long,
    but I knew it was.
    Sleeping to find again.

    The tree has fallen,
    and no one was there
    to hear.

    The stars fall, but
    no one was there
    to see.

    Actions overcome words
    but both can still shatter
    on the floor like glass.
    Tell me now...

    With steel to my head,
    uncertian of what is
    in front or behind-
    What should I do?




    Submitted on 2009-02-12 04:34:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You cant dodge bullets...
    | Posted on 2009-02-12 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]



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