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    dots Submission Name: Spiral Down The Conscious Hall (Album)dots
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    Author: eggshells
    ASL Info:    27/M/VA
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 23/54/57
    Words: 455
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 56
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 3406



    Description:
       Album for a band that doesn't quite exist yet... MATE.
    Look for us, if we ever form.

    (unfinished)


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    dotsSpiral Down The Conscious Hall (Album)dots
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    1. -Submissive-

    Angle of your eyes
    Light perception
    Glorious wings of my deception
    Help me fly
    Help me get away

    Deceit
    Colliding with my lies
    Fabled talks
    Of reality arise
    Questioning your god
    Tongue swollen
    I can't talk
    Horns a growin'
    Teeth a snappin'
    Soul a flowin'
    Satan a clappin'


    Body, expires
    But soul eternal
    Water, couldn't douse your fires
    Cold eyes are stern and all
    The Angels
    And all
    Your Demons
    Couldn't back you down from your decision
    As all frown
    Couldn't grasp your vision
    You wouldn't listen
    To your hypocrysms
    Now we all suffer
    Choking on your last supper


    Angle of your eyes
    Light perception
    Glorious wings of my deception
    Help me fly
    Help me fly
    Help me fly
    Help me get away!


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    2. -Holy Strut-

    I watch these three shadows of mine
    As they dance with the flicker of light.
    So fragile.
    They seem to laugh and mimic my existence
    Pouring off of me as I walk this road.
    So dark.
    One light seems to glimmer alone
    Stabbing through the black as a knife.
    So bright.
    I stare at this light above me
    A halo, a burden weighing me down.
    So heavy.
    So meaningless.
    And yet you wear your god like a crown
    Sitting on your throne of faith.
    Discarding all others of their beliefs
    Knowing you walk a true path.
    Ignorance.
    Bliss.


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    3. -Spiral Fire-

    You Twist About
    Scream and Shout
    As you burn
    For what you've done
    Thy kingdom come
    Down, around me
    I watched your cities burn
    Down, around me
    I watched your Heaven fall
    Down, around me
    No living soul remains
    Here, around meeeee

    (Guitar solo)
    (Chorus)
    Down
    Into the flames
    Burning
    Scolded and maimed
    Satisfied
    The Devil coils his tongue
    Venture
    Into the blackened sun
    Spiral
    Out of control
    Sickened
    Battered and old
    (End Chorus)
    This Fire
    Consumes your sins
    Desire
    Burns your whims
    You can't control
    Anything
    You've gambled and lost
    Everything
    Betrayed, Beaten,
    And You've lost the game
    Only one can be heard!
    (Chorus)


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    4.

    I watched as a valley spread through your body.
    The worms made your head a home.
    Peace and beauty started to grow from you.
    Something no one had seen!

    And so it seemed death agreed with you
    Life much better with you in the ground
    God smiles as you finally bring peace
    Just cause you cannot move!

    Rot, is taking you away
    Death, has won this game
    Life, slipped through your hands
    Now, your deaf blind and lame!






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