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    dots Submission Name: Hope for our Futuredots
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    Author: dthforeverpain8
    ASL Info:    17/Female/TMON
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 112/217/289
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsHope for our Futuredots
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    Waiting for the days
    When we can be free
    Is a grueling process
    But no one knows that
    Better than those
    Who have come before us
    How I envy them
    And hold them in highest respect
    They are my joy
    And hope for a bright future
    Whenever my resolve fades
    And my heart aches for acceptance
    I see hope in your faces
    Your pride fuels my own
    Thank you for being there
    Lighting the way for our kind
    As we travel roads of uncertainty
    In a dark unaccepting world




    Submitted on 2009-02-12 13:37:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. This was utterly moving and awesome! I love it!
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    | Posted on 2009-02-13 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]


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