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Hope for our Future

Author: dthforeverpain8
ASL Info:    17/Female/TMON
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Words: 91
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Hope for our Future

Waiting for the days
When we can be free
Is a grueling process
But no one knows that
Better than those
Who have come before us
How I envy them
And hold them in highest respect
They are my joy
And hope for a bright future
Whenever my resolve fades
And my heart aches for acceptance
I see hope in your faces
Your pride fuels my own
Thank you for being there
Lighting the way for our kind
As we travel roads of uncertainty
In a dark unaccepting world

Submitted on 2009-02-12 13:37:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wow. This was utterly moving and awesome! I love it!
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