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    dots Submission Name: Godís Righteous Indignationdots
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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    dotsGodís Righteous Indignationdots
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    Godís Righteous Indignation



    How you believe in
    Paper
    How you believe in
    Words
    How you believe in
    Damnation
    And heavens
    Vengeance
    Of burning
    Wrath
    How you believe in
    Satan
    Fallen angel
    Rules the
    Earth

    Righteous
    How
    You
    Donít
    Believe in
    Love

    Funny
    How
    You
    Donít
    Believe
    In
    God










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