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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Religion




    Decrepit bone
    Fed
    To
    Starving
    Dogs

    Faith

    Unconditional

    Love












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