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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Wrapped



    Cellophane rainbows
    Spectrum dreams
    Silken tied

    Brooding stormy skies
    Sunset patterns
    And quiet moments

    Kisses in sunlight
    Laughing rain
    Cold cuddling warm nights

    Bottles of deep red wine
    Candles melted by time
    And embers of requited passion

    Sweet seconds captured
    Fingers entwined
    And sparkling eyes

    Lazy stretching
    Quite mornings
    All my dreamings

    If I could








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