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    dots Submission Name: A Winter's Evedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsA Winter's Evedots
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    Look out my window
    See the beauty before me
    The night a snowy glow
    Flakes bright & falling free
    A perfect evening winter show
    White blanket comforts lonely tree

    Thomas Kinkade sat in awe
    Snows white are softly driven
    Perfect geometry is nature raw
    White is cleansing & forgiven
    As in history we saw
    The gift ALL are given ~*~ ~*~ ~*~




    Submitted on 2009-02-12 21:01:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You captured a moment of natures beautiful geomtry at work. IT is wonderfully present in such beauty is it not?

    Kate
    | Posted on 2009-04-22 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]
      I got caught, most recently, in the Denver blizzard. Living in Hawaii too long made this not funny. I have not been a fan of snow the past few days until now. I love the line "White blanket comforts lonely tree". It made me want to open my blinds and watch the snow fall.

    Nice piece, thank you!

    Write on!

    Kuuipo
    | Posted on 2009-04-01 00:00:00 | by Kuuipo | [ Reply to This ]
      After unseasonably warm weather melted all our snow, I woke this morning to a Kinkade-like view of fresh, white snow falling to cover the ground once more. Your poem made me think about the beauty rather than my tendency to grumble over the cold. Thanks for the positively lovely thoughts that you always share! :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2009-02-15 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the line about Kinkade. It brings the image of lights bouncing off the snow and warmth without ever saying anything about either.
    Sounds like things are peaceful in your world right now. I love snow, probably because I don't see too much of it.
    | Posted on 2009-02-14 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      Nothing is more lovely to look at than a soft snow cover blanketing the earth and forest. I get a peaceful and reassuring image from this lovely verse. A white blanket covering a lonely tree presents a delightful work picture. Nice work, pretty lady!
    | Posted on 2009-02-13 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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