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    dots Submission Name: Kitler Pt 2 James McErlaindots
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    Author: freak_like_me
    ASL Info:    20/female/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    4.81 - 120/118/49
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 756
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    Bytes: 680



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       about neighbour kitty cat, who showed no love...


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    dotsKitler Pt 2 James McErlaindots
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    Kitler, it was my neighbour too
    snowy white with a smudge
    kitler didnt like my housemate much
    this is my part two

    Kitler would stare and flare its paw with a tap
    saved by a window pane
    kitler seemed slightly insane
    why does it detest so much instead of taking a crap

    Kitler had its rage just briefly
    it was big headed in every sense
    Kitler would need to subdue and poo its tense
    relax now little big headed kitty

    Kitler was my neighbour too
    where was my love when i needed it
    Kitler would only hiss and sit
    this is my part two






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