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    dots Submission Name: static in my minddots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 221
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
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    dotsstatic in my minddots
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    static in my mind when i see whats left behind and i know i still got time to make this all come out alright and when the futures out of sight ill wait all night to see the morning light and watch it in its fight from dusk til dawn til its time to say so long and ill be gone and ill be strong cuz i know this isnt where i belong everything is nothing anymore and anything will leave me at your door cuz everything is changing and i feel like rearranging my past to make this last cuz right now my hearts in a cast and i wont blame you this time cuz im trying to leave this all behind but i dont want to walk out of here blind im not ready to lose this shine and something about it is leaving me breathless and carressless somewhat careless but not loveless why cant i help this feeling that keeps me from deciding that i know everything about the way you speak to me when in my own sick reality i know that everything is nothing and im dreaming and sometimes this insanity goes to far and i know were both trying so hard just to be stars and its not easy living with these scars




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