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    dots Submission Name: as resurrection parts, we do, sighdots
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    Author: augustcranes
    ASL Info:    16 - Female - Underwood
    Elite Ratio:    6.3 - 23/8/6
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 63
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       Filled with a quiet sadness nigh to tears,
    When tears come fresh from no ungentle spring,
    Beside this stream, whose tongue runs faltering,
    I watch this graceful fading of the year's.
    - Fading Days; O.C. Auringer


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    dotsas resurrection parts, we do, sighdots
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    The dust settles in the crevices of flesh, split

    pink beauty sighs, on the morning rise

    and only in lengthy night can he and I admit



    When we lie side by side as gossamer lovers,

    you shift, in the resurrection of things,

    while whispering walls have no more words

    and slumbers part with the spring.



    No more tenderness, God knows, here I admit,

    forever yearning with reaching moist eyes,

    while these infidelities, creeps, and I submit



    Never shall I have you here, or you I again,

    memories laid into matches three by three

    and there is no splendor - resurrection

    as always dust settles on bent angel wings.




    Submitted on 2009-02-15 02:11:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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