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    dots Submission Name: A Disgustiondots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    19/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    3.99 - 1202/1167/316
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 117
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 568



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    dotsA Disgustiondots
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    I've been standing on a cloud all day
    watching the people underneath

    Half starved idiots carved from whale bone and painted with glitter
    walking
    in and out
    of every corner
    a mouth sore and dry discontented eyes

    There is no joy in life right now
    except for small things
    she cannot paint
    it's gone
    the most beautiful story has ended
    and these words which started with so much potential
    have fallen flat
    to delight
    of this
    audience




    Submitted on 2009-02-15 03:35:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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