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    dots Submission Name: Sleepwalkerdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 289
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 350
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1956


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    And in the darkest sweeping wings is held all probable
    The night of dreamings; wished embraces of gossamer senses ponder miracles
    And leave their mark; ever in hope....

    She is waiting

    Pale in naked moon lit sexual stretches
    Fanning shadows curve on satins anguished blue
    To subtle bronzed drips rusted rivers
    Lay about her in ever flowing delta’s of hair

    These the coy covers of shoulders demure beneath their lifting expectation
    Quintessence supplicant to floating hands; risen
    Her slow beat thumps on a sudden heart
    The fleur-de-lis arched beseeching the avid prayer of lips

    The floorboards creek

    And though through empty rooms the sighs may roam
    Though forever it seems she has lain alone
    There are eyes, by bat wing devised; by the caverns urgent aphrodisia
    He has been gathered by the corpuscle of desire, to come to her

    And by each and every silent unspent moan of longing
    He inscribed this hours, fretful, reflections of her mantle parted
    An eternal caress folded; ingress to her concupiscent heart
    Mere Luna beams of dreams of loves physique, his love, made love to her

    Dawns dissipation breaths

    Remembering the warmth before forgotten days; where separated so
    Bathes her awash in amber fire; and traces his finger along her spine
    To leave her sleeping in those somnambulist foot prints
    Looses in the languid illusive of arms, wrapped in suns breaking

    Turning to the light he asks for its edifice, hold fast on waking
    Struggle to define by wanting the irrevocable kiss; pressed to her
    A taste recited by those gossamer senses ponder miracles
    And leave their mark; forever in hope

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