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    dots Submission Name: Why do I have to be lonely?dots
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    Author: Doublefeather
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 69/55/29
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsWhy do I have to be lonely?dots
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    Why do I have to be lonely?
    Am I cursed with such?
    Or is it a blessing in disguise?
    From God's loving touch,

    I feel both at ease of commitment,
    But still without a companion,
    It's like a painter without a brush,
    Or a rider without his stallion,

    It's like there's a wound,
    But a small peace as well,
    I believe that part is from God,
    It helps keep my emotions still,

    I do long to find her,
    The girl I'm suposed to meet,
    And pray she'll be all I ever dreamed,
    And God's will for me.




    Submitted on 2009-02-15 21:23:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can really feel and relate to this atm...I just wrote one about being single and the main feeling is a combination of loneliness/having freedom to find yourself and can be quite positive but still lonely ...i like this even better than my own..i could have just read this instead :)
    | Posted on 2009-05-12 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      I Believe there is a longing as long as there is lonely, a hand in hand kind’a thing which means its been around for as long as mankind has been upon this earth. It was a very good and expressive poem. It you look for the good within that moment you can always look at it as if you’re bettering yourself so as when you do find that right person down the road you’ll be a better and mature person but also someone who also better her.


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    | Posted on 2009-03-25 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a verry good qestion but its not about an age old question its about you and you question a powerfull look into the mind and thoughts of doublefeather
    | Posted on 2009-03-24 00:00:00 | by cha | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellent poem! Mankind has wondered throughout the ages "why am I lonely" and what is loneliness all about. This poem does a great job of addresing that age old question. Nice work!
    | Posted on 2009-02-16 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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