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    dots Submission Name: Dance With Himdots

    Author: realpoet
    Elite Ratio:    6.51 - 904/475/311
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsDance With Himdots

    We live under the wings of a mighty, mighty God
    who rules us with His mighty mighty rod
    of love and grace and happy happiness long
    as we confess our hindering sin
    and take up love and fellowship to dance
    and swim in His great lake of grace and forgive
    in the promise of everlasting life to live
    before the throne of our mighty mighty God.

    Live then, live then in His body and blood
    and walk where His grace is ever in a flood.
    We're the promise in His promised land
    when we hold love and fellowship in hand.
    Live then, live then in our mighty mighty God.

    Dance then,dance then, dance with Him.
    He will show you the steps in this dance of His.
    Put your foot forward and dance in love and faith.
    Kick up your heels and clap with joy !
    Evangelise and be an annoy
    to the world out dancing without any joy.
    Dance, dance, dance and give no heed
    to those adancing to the devil's lead.
    This is your dance in the arms of Him
    who opens Heaven in your dance with Him.
    Dance, dance dance to joy's eternal home.

    Submitted on 2009-02-16 06:06:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      and there is NO longing in this,it seems like your very content doing the chicken dance
    | Posted on 2009-02-16 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]
      What a nightmare!

    Its like some cult...except with trumpets.

    Seriously,I can understand if you love your faith,but why does it have to be so bland?

    It doesnt even scratch the surface of intelligence,whats more it just screams DOGMA DOGMA DOGMA!!!

    Im not talking about religion,Im talking about your poem.

    Lets dance along to the merry merry happy super duper song of the graciously great lord like lovely cattle!

    Gee,isnt it great? Rejoice rejoice wave your arms about and girate!

    Like an idiot.

    It makes me want to puke,if you read enough of the bible,its convincing enough,if you watch the God channel,your getting spoon-fed.

    Im so annoyed to see this lack-lustre writing about something so important.

    You make God seem like Barney the flipping dinosaur!

    Do you realise how terrifying that sounds???

    Please...read some proper religious poetry,listen to Thomas Tallis,I dont care what it is,but these propoganda poems are killing me.


    | Posted on 2009-02-16 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]

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