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    dots Submission Name: Souldots
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    Author: H.Redd
    ASL Info:    28/m/ lake charles
    Elite Ratio:    1.9 - 45/43/69
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSouldots
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    I die every night,
    So many people fear death my fear is sleep.
    There is a great misunderstanding
    who I say I am and who I will be.
    I have that night time world one thinks it's a gife
    when I think it is a curse I fear the sleep
    I die every night as soul move brezze.
    Red stars are in my dreams




    Submitted on 2009-02-16 08:39:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very kool. sleep is like a temporary death the way i see it.

    | Posted on 2009-02-17 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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