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    dots Submission Name: confusion...dots
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    Author: save me
    ASL Info:    19/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 26/51/53
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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    dotsconfusion...dots
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    I can't describe the way that i feel.
    i can't put it into words,
    it seems impossible.
    slowly you put my heart back together,
    and for that i thank you,
    i can't imagine being without you,
    and just thinking about it scares me to death,
    i want to be by your side for the rest of my life,
    i hope you can understand that i am so sorry.
    there's so much i want to say,
    and i can't spit it out,
    i don't want to hold it in anymore,
    because it hurts too much.
    nothing will ever be the same.
    i make no sense, and i know that,
    but i can't explain my thoughts in any other words,
    except i love you.




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