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Author: save me
ASL Info:    19/F
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Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Longing
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I can't describe the way that i feel.
i can't put it into words,
it seems impossible.
slowly you put my heart back together,
and for that i thank you,
i can't imagine being without you,
and just thinking about it scares me to death,
i want to be by your side for the rest of my life,
i hope you can understand that i am so sorry.
there's so much i want to say,
and i can't spit it out,
i don't want to hold it in anymore,
because it hurts too much.
nothing will ever be the same.
i make no sense, and i know that,
but i can't explain my thoughts in any other words,
except i love you.

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