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    Author: save me
    ASL Info:    19/F
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 26/51/53
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    i don't know what to think, what to say, nothing. i know my mind isn't blank, it's filled with thoughts and emotions. if i were just to spit my thoughts out randomly, i would make no sense, what a surprise. i need you, and that scares me, to care for someone more than your own being. i can't live without you and it may sound ridiculous. we're just kids, right? nothing lasts forever, but i give my heart to you. hold it with all of your being, i know i'll cherish yours. your heart is safe in my hands. don't be scared to let go, its worth it...i promise.




    Submitted on 2009-02-16 18:27:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You should always hold your heart till you know it is time to give it away. You can only truely give it away once.
    | Posted on 2009-02-23 00:00:00 | by lancerdrag0n | [ Reply to This ]
      touching and moving made my heart all mushy, props for you, tyson
    | Posted on 2009-02-17 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]


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