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Author: bubble_popper15
ASL Info:    17, f, confused
Elite Ratio:    4.13 - 201 /127 /45
Words: 115
Class/Type: Poetry /Venting
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I'm just going through some rough patches in my relationship, and these are simply my feelings.

More Bad Times

You're driving me away
with the hurtful words you say
and all the games you play.
You're driving me away.

You have me under your spell.
I can't get out of this hell.
It feels like I'm in jail.
You have me under your spell.

Why do I wear this ring
when it doesn't mean a thing?
What happiness does it bring
when I wear this fuckin ring?

I don't understand why
you always make me cry.
I feel like I wanna die.
I just don't understand why.

Help me through this pain
so I can dance in the rain.
Make everything right in my brain.
Help me through this pain.

Submitted on 2009-02-16 19:29:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like this, I like it because I can see a fitting to my life.
i some what dated this guy, he was older and told me he'd wait for me to turn 18 and then ya-da-ya-da, well he kept 'cheating' on me, and i basicly 'cheated' back, cause i had mixed feeling for him(and the guy i 'cheated' w i really did like him, it was nvr sex). but one day he ran off with the girl, who knew nothin of me, now he is married and has a kid. he msged me once saying he was sorry and he wonders how it might be, and i said no sense in wondering, youre married now.
but i put 'cheat' in quotations cause really we never actually dated so, it doesnt count to me lol

i think he is happy now...but idk.. I definitely dont talk to him. he doesnt deserve it. but yeah. i talked to his wife once, cause she had questions about what was interesting.
| Posted on 2009-05-27 00:00:00 | by KimmyBoo | [ Reply to This ]

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