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    dots Submission Name: Cacophony dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsCacophony dots
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    Cacophony



    The wall flash

    Brick

    Petal footsteps

    Coffee cups

    Repent

    Crystal scattered shadows

    Reverberate heat

    And the tolling bell reiterates
    I find myself teetering on sacrosanct edges
    Repeating green; blossom handkerchiefs and scattering children

    Sent

    I sent it

    Minuscule

    Message

    Daggered and devised

    Ricochet pulmonary

    Severed the art; and suffered the art of running

    Get
    It
    Out !

    Traffic stammered

    Juggernaut

    Jaunted coughs

    I-eeeeeeeeeee squeeeeeeezed passed

    And rattled the billy can and tins cans jangle rattle rattled rattle

    BENDING ALL OF THIS TO A FEATHER !!!!!!!!!

    STOP !!

    ………………………. Her form rides perfect

    Relax

    It’s not the perfection yet
    Of ice cream kisses

    Flood

    Gather

    Don Quixote consequently

    And beat the walls

    Cacophony !













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