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    dots Submission Name: the explorerdots
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    Author: nansofast
    Elite Ratio:    5.7 - 2351/2103/268
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       it's going to take a long time
    to write myself out of this one
    am I learning?
    of course


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    dotsthe explorerdots
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    love asks us to be
    where we haven't gone before
    into a shadow where love hasn't found
    herself yet, and I am lost in the abyss
    that isn't yet you

    call me Indiana Jones
    because I see the grail and it's
    solemn liquid pours over my head
    fated christening but you're the babe
    and I have arrived before you

    we are the characters love has cast
    I'm scaling the wall and swimming the moat
    until you believe in yourself
    and return the sweetness

    reluctant to be tied to the chair
    with visions of the lit fuse
    sadly looking for signs of life
    I romance the dance that is you.
    is my gaze a simple myth
    that distorts my perception?

    love owns me
    and is looking for devotees
    the bewilders are howling at my door
    and I am the explorer







    Submitted on 2009-02-19 19:11:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I am my beloved's
    and my beloved is mining
    the cosmos for a means to say
    the exact same thing

    universanity can never be
    measured in light years
    but in the multitiude
    of years left in the light

    and now be still:
    explore
    | Posted on 2009-02-20 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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