Description: i wrote this but had a friend type it for me cuz im a slow typer with limited time...but he gives the computer razor burn...btw ill edit this later this is just a rough draft...
nothing different just fixed up a bit.
the real background story is: i was "gangster" as a kid. half of this is something i wrote as a kid and the second half is something i added recently, in the end you could say its like a dedication to a girl i like.
Since the first day i met you i knew
we would be together forever for eternity
you were a dream in my eye - yeah baby its true
every time i think of happiness, im thinking of you
you are the greatest thing to me in my life you see
cuz without you by my side i dont know where id be
so im telling you again and again to let you know that im lovin you with all my heart and my soul
from this day forward to the day that i die
i wanna stay by your side till god moves us to the sky. Your my queen and i cherish every moment with you
i wanna give you everything in life, yeah thats true
you make me feel complete inside and in my mind
god created you and sent you knowing youd be mine
a perfect match made in heaven-you and me
im gonna keep you at my side-as close as can be
im gonna never let you go-hold you tight like a fist
i know its not here yet but believe it exists
theres a certain kind of happiness inside of my life
and the day it comes through i could make you my wife. i just hope you accept and take me in as true
all i can say is that i love you, i do, its true, i love you now nobodys perfect of course and we argue sometimes
it only makes us stronger cuz im yours and your mine. we chill all day at your home i get your respect and trust but you know if fools trip im down to "bust"
being me aint easy and you know how i am
so let me take you to a special place
take my hand lets travel to a sunset drift for days
your the one thats down for me your the one that i crave.
girl i keep thinking about the way you make me feel when im in your presence you give my body straight chills
just knowing you want me by your side
mellows my mind it gives me alot of pride
girl i want you now and everyday
so please sweet lady dont be afraid
i got caught by your body personality too
your hypnotized look- i had to persue
your like a snowflake falling in a winter sky
so tantilizing i cant deny
ive always loved you from the very start
theres nothing in this world thats gonna tear us apart cuz your my baby i hope you know its true
every satisfying moment made me think of you
and ill never forget what you mean to me coming straight from your man simply known as THieF
Hey I like this. I'll probably like it even more when you edit it and put it into its very own structure - but as far as the writing goes, it's very very sweet.
I especially liked "until god puts us in the sky" (I think that's how it was worded). It had a certain touch of religion, that wasn't strong enough to really get under anyone's skin.
And as far as your friend writing... I'm kind of proud of you. I can't bring myself to show my friends these things,never mind have them type it for me. (Mind you, I'm the fastest typer I know anyway :P). But I guess it shows a lot of character and personal strength that you do share stuff like this. That you have someone to trust.
And that you mean all of your words.
That's so great :)