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    dots Submission Name: Predicationsdots
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    Author: realpoet
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    Humans,humans, oh so small
    growing ever big and tall,
    such wonder of all surrounds
    awalking in the steps of hounds,

    What mind there be of fashion?
    what heart is there of passion
    that formed you as eternal
    in bones with covered dermal ?

    Ah,what wretched strength of wrong
    to think demise of truth so strong
    that wilted Garden of Eden
    when lie seemed greater greeting?

    How staunch was thy cofession
    in covered clothed agression ?
    Could the Heavens reign supreme
    or thy thoughts of better dream ?

    What paradise can there be ?
    What pro and con , look and see ?
    What doctrine has better sound ?
    Can not man see with God around ?

    Through the ages come and gone
    in all their shrouds of tinkling coins,
    when revival sounds were heard
    none denoted prophetic word.

    Humans, humans , oh so small,
    growing ever big and tall ,
    such wonder of all surrounds
    still walking in the steps of hounds.









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      wretched fossils polished white
    in the strata of the night
    whose fibrous being Blake had fed
    like lineations left unread

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