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    dots Submission Name: geek lovedots

    Author: besodemuerte
    ASL Info:    31/f/pa
    Elite Ratio:    5.83 - 242/253/27
    Words: 200
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 644
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       song lyrics... not sure where i'm gonna go from here... i definitely think it needs more though...

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    dotsgeek lovedots

    Well, I don't even know her, but I wish that she were dead
    cause maybe then you'd be here in my arms instead
    Perhaps she'll drown in Echo Lake.
    They'll be pulling seaweed from her mouth for days.
    A purple bloated body; both her wrists are cut
    they'll never find the rocks that i forced into her gut.
    after the funeral we could go out.
    You can get dropped off as the hearse goes by my house.
    I'll cook you dinner... we'll watch a movie... and
    you'll see me smile and you'll fall in love again.
    maybe she'll fall.... into a well
    a well full of snakes with rattles on thier tails.
    She'll cry for help, but her screams will go unheard
    cause without a tongue no one can hear your words.
    after the funeral (closed casket viewing) we could go out
    You can get dropped off as the hearse goes by my house.
    We can go bowling -you'll get a strike
    and i'll do everything just the way you like.
    You know that i dont know her, but i wish that she were dead.
    Cause then you'd be here.... in my arms instead.

    Submitted on 2009-02-20 06:41:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If this was a movie I would go see it. There would have to be more that one girl, like everyone he hooked up with that was not you and after each one you would be there for him. Then in the end when you finely realize he is just a no good so and so, you do some grand romantic gesture and kill him too.
    | Posted on 2010-12-04 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]

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